Tuesday, December 2, 2014
For the 3rd paper, the synthesis paper i felt like i could of been more organized like I planned in my purpose statement. I also felt like the authors that were provided in the packet did not give me enough in order to provide a counter argument. Although I do feel like I emphasized on key points as to why it is very important for individuals to stay focused in school and obtain a degree. As far as my intended audience goes i felt like i provided great evidence to prove to them that it is important to obtain a college degree in order to succeed but not only a college degree is important and I felt like I remained focus on the two key elements thats make an individual stand out and better qualified.